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inspiredpoetwriter
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Minnesota

0 posted 2003-12-29 11:23 PM



a poem I just wrote out anger..check it out..

I feel like a child lonely,unloved
A millon things haunting,tortering my soul
Down on my knees bloody and scabbed
Fresh hot tears soak my skin burning
Away my flesh,my troubles,my inner beauty.

Holding up my hands to the heavens above
Red drops of blood cover my hands
Leaving each punishment a scar on my
Skin crying in pain,my faults covering
Me up a blanket so black the nights
Never end.

Worn out,tired,afraid to speak
Shivering and shuddering the stone floor,
Where I lay is my only friend I have no wishes
No dreams,no happiness all I have is my,
Body it's self and the shattered peices of my heart scattered on the floor.

©Care

© Copyright 2003 Care - All Rights Reserved
Michelle_loves_Mike
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since 2003-12-20
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1 posted 2003-12-29 11:26 PM


its not easy to title anothers work,,,,,
if i had to fathom one,,,,
it might be " questions within"
take care
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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