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Ashley79
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0 posted 2003-12-29 05:58 PM


Shattered;
Cold;
Misery

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Ashley79
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1 posted 2003-12-29 06:13 PM


scratch that post -- here:

Utter confusion
I've lost control
No one can help me now.

Shattered
Cold
Misery

Self-relfection
Ugly, Stupid
Inner soul, concious

Deep confusion
Hurting; wounded
No one can help me now.

Ravenwolfvoyager
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2 posted 2003-12-29 06:46 PM


Life can be like that. It is hard to breathe sometimes. It iss hard to take on everything at once. Life can be overwhelming but we have to accept our positives and negatives for that is all that we have within that makes us who we are. Your poetry is easy to absorbed, thank you for sharing.  
SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-12-29 07:18 PM


from the voice of experience..there's always hope. Don't feel that way. Happy New Year.
GG
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Lost in thought
4 posted 2003-12-29 07:28 PM


yet there's always reason to trudge along...
I know this...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-12-29 10:36 PM


Please check your e-mail, Ashley.
Thank you.
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