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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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This Thing I feel it, the pain throughout sitting, standing, having lain for hours either, or and all. I feel it as it spreads and even my mind can't react, can only be held in silence as words trickle through read by burning eyes, head supported by leaning back the touch almost too painful to withstand this thing called flu. M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-29-2003 08:58 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Shoot! I didn't see you in the flu shot line, and look what happens! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
...but I did get my shot ;( sniff sniff |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Maureen, I hope you get over it, soon. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
time for a hot toddie, blanket, and the fire place, a good sleep and presto...... anyways thats my cure.. hope you feel better soon bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Great poem - the flu is certainly no respecter of persons and evidently not flu shots either - hope you get well quickly - Paul |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Duncan's Cure: 1000mg time release Vit. C. And it works to get rid of the nasty flu bug faster! Hope you feel better soon!  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I thought you were writing about poetry written by Toerag or Balladeer. I guess the flu is close enough, though - lol. |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Please keep it away from me, with my luck I'll get Mad Cow Disease! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ravenwolfvoyage...I am trying not to touch anyone's poems..don't wish to spread it... Just don't eat any beef for awhile  M |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
That's okay Maureen. You mean you get Mad Cow Disease from eating beef? As long as it's still safe to kiss them I guess I'm in the clear....LOL I hope that you are feeling better. And thank you again for that beautiful write I'm still in the clouds. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
we all have had it here too my heart goes out to ya Connie |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
well put,,,,,a pain we've all shared,,,get well soon Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sit tight I'm on the way with some chicken noodle soup  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hope you recover soon Maureen , I spoke with a friend last week that was suffering the affects of the flu shot !!! they say it can be far worse than the actual flu Hope |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I like surprises and this one was! Hope you get to feeling better. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I sooooooo know! Feel better Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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