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wintertao
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

0 posted 2003-12-29 02:43 AM



Raindrops in the moonlight
       I tilt my head back
Raindrops taste the sweetest
       Arches in my neck
       Feel the water flow
Raindrops know where to go-
       Soft and Sultry
       Like an old jazz tune
Words are hanging next to the moon
       Alone in my mind
       Walking thru the hall
Hanging voice torches on the wall

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2003-12-29 02:45 AM


I love to taste the raindrops....

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

lil' Angel
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since 2003-11-14
Posts 116

2 posted 2003-12-29 02:48 AM


excellent poem

Lil' Angel


"There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord."  Proverbs 21:30



iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2003-12-29 02:49 AM


"Alone in my mind
       Walking thru the hall
Hanging voice torches on the wall:"

Very good lines!  

jaicie114
Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
4 posted 2003-12-29 12:28 PM


wintertao...

I just love to read you!  Thank you!  

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-12-29 12:30 PM


OMG!  I love this!!
And...into my library it goes.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

wintertao
Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL
6 posted 2003-12-29 01:18 PM


thank you very much for your kind replies I really appreciate it
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