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harash
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since 2003-12-27
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0 posted 2003-12-29 01:28 AM



When Heart Embraces Mind

Loving life,
Not quite enough to survive.
Something is needed
To make
Atmosphere alive.

Experiences of life,
Highs and lows.
Drive our emotions
To lead and to flow.

Every wound,
We got from our owns,
Bleeds more for the fear,
To be left alone.

Every milestone
Yet
Gives us confidence
To travel again
To retain our crown.

Love
Begins to grind,
When
Heart embraces mind.


~~~~*HARASH MAHAJAN*~~~~



© Copyright 2003 Harash Mahajan - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2003-12-29 01:30 AM


Loved it..sometimes the heart rules the mind!

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

lil' Angel
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since 2003-11-14
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2 posted 2003-12-29 01:50 AM


That is a beautiful poem


Lil' Angel



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3 posted 2003-12-29 02:35 AM


Yes, I agree with ARH...sometimes the
mind is
controlled completely by the heart. That can be
both good and bad. A very thought-provoking poem.
I really enjoyed reading.
Hugs  


"Love isn't blind, it just only sees what matters." William Curry
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4 posted 2003-12-29 02:39 AM


I really enjoyed this...espcecailly the last stanza it just had this powerfull simplicty to it if that makes any sense! Lovely work, nicely done!
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iliana
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5 posted 2003-12-29 02:45 AM


Very interesting poem; I especially liked the last verse.  BEEEEEEEwell, friend.
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