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Incomplete Impatience
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Incomplete Impatience |
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Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets 
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The burden of another day rests fully upon shoulders already weary with this torturous waiting. I can't digest this feeling of complete insecurity, this digression from normal. It's slowly eating me, starting deep inside at the center of the sickness and creeping quickly to show in my eyes, in my new-found slouch. The smoke pushes it back for minutes, or seconds, but not nearly enough to help the complete disorder in my mind. I need to rearrange; I need to fall apart. I need to disassemble; I desire to restart. I've been more lost than ever, floating with impatience. -*-*- |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I need to rearrange; I need to fall apart. I need to disassemble; I desire to restart. I've been more lost than ever, floating with impatience'''' Oh gads you write this well, I know this feeling....."A desire to restart" hugsssss, hang in there....  This morning there’s a calm I can’t explain |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
How great this write is!!in this negative feelings...but strong willpower which one shows can fight with this unwanted block.. always Harash |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! do I understand this! |
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