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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-12-28 11:57 PM


the night is getting to dark
to see where were going
but i'll follow you
i'll follow you
to ends of the earth...
the suns getting to bright
to see where were going
but i'll follow you
blindly
blindly
be my eyes
so all i can feel is you
you
be my eyes
i'm blinded by love...


"Hello my name is..Distance..."

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harash
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since 2003-12-27
Posts 99
India
1 posted 2003-12-29 01:42 AM


A nice and open write...lovely to read...
lil' Angel
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since 2003-11-14
Posts 116

2 posted 2003-12-29 01:47 AM


I really enjoyed your poem.  it was well written
A Romantic Heart
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Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-12-29 02:42 AM


If only our hearts had eyes....but we remain blinded by the light of love..

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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4 posted 2003-12-29 02:52 AM


Love can do that to us,
can't it?
Hugs,  

"Love isn't blind, it just only sees what matters." William Curry
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iliana
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5 posted 2003-12-29 02:55 AM


Sounds like love to me!
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since 2003-01-03
Posts 696
washington, USA
6 posted 2003-12-29 02:55 AM


blinded by love...sigh...I know that feeling. Nicely done I really liked the flow and candince to this piece. wonderful job
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

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