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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-12-28 07:29 PM



Interpretation

some things
are not obvious
I flow
on my toes
you tap
yet, no matter
the construction
we still
dance


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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2003-12-28 07:33 PM


Great interpretation of perception!  Diversity -- the spice of life.  A wonderful new year is wished your way! .......lol
Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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Ohio, USA
2 posted 2003-12-28 07:49 PM


great poetry - just loved being taken away with this - Paul
S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom
3 posted 2003-12-29 12:39 PM


h,

Ah, but the power
of observation
is the key
Elsewise to
dance alone and free
but never as we

s.a.g.

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
4 posted 2003-12-29 12:55 PM


your thoughts dance freely
like light on rippled water
carving imagery

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

5 posted 2003-12-29 01:09 AM


wonderful!

"I can't believe
I've lost the very best of me"

Natalie Merchant


alisa
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since 2003-08-20
Posts 70
Florida
6 posted 2003-12-29 08:51 AM


ditto to what everyone else said...
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