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Interception of the Wind

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inkedgoddess
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since 11-19-2002
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0 posted 12-28-2003 05:55 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for inkedgoddess



On the whims of wind
you were delivered,

the echoing chimes
sang of autumn,

we lay bare beneath
the blanket of sky,

so soft your kiss,
your goodbye,
without the predictability
of a followup time,

i seek you now
in blades of grass,
in beads of rain,
beyond the pink leafed trees,
above the point where horizons dim,
uncaptured by a photo lens,

as branches change
the dawns
from gold to taupe to reds,
then to vacant spaces,
time and time again,

the wind blows freely
through these netted hands,

as i seek to find its beginning or its end,

but silly me,

landing back in spring's embrace
missing autumns rebirth
that came and went
round the bend
two times again,

while i was
standing here with
just a prayer
against the interception
of the wind


[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-29-2003 08:05 AM).]

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Margherita
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Eternity


1 posted 12-28-2003 06:02 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Oh, this is wonderful, dear inkedgoddess!
Filled with colored emotion.
Love and hugs. Margherita
Ravenwolfvoyager
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since 12-25-2003
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2 posted 12-28-2003 06:51 PM       View Profile for Ravenwolfvoyager   Email Ravenwolfvoyager   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravenwolfvoyager

Stunning, the captivations are so vivid and beutifully orchestrated. Well done, this work is loved.
BluesSerenade
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since 10-23-2001
Posts 9867
By the Seaside


3 posted 12-28-2003 08:06 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

I could have copied the whole dang poem,
but this stands out.....

so soft your kiss,
your goodbye,
without the predictability
of a followup time,

i seek you now
in blades of grass,
in beads of rain,
beyond the pink leafed trees,
above the point where horizons dim,
uncaptured by a photo lens

This is just too beautiful and
one of your very best by far!

Love ya little girlie girl~

iliana
Member Patricius
since 12-05-2003
Posts 13488
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4 posted 12-28-2003 08:08 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

"while i was
standing here with
just a prayer
against the interception
of the wind"

Wistful and beautiful write........BEEEEwell!
Dark Angel
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since 08-04-99
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5 posted 12-28-2003 11:19 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Lovely Inked... especially.....

i seek you now
in blades of grass,
in beads of rain,
beyond the pink leafed trees,
above the point where horizons dim,
uncaptured by a photo lens,


Maree

"I can't believe
I've lost the very best of me"

Natalie Merchant

bklynboy
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since 12-15-2002
Posts 662
florida


6 posted 12-29-2003 07:47 AM       View Profile for bklynboy   Email bklynboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bklynboy

Very vivid and with alot of passion,,,,excellent!
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 11-19-2002
Posts 7522
Ohio


7 posted 12-29-2003 08:05 AM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

thanks guys and dolls
bklynboy
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8 posted 01-18-2004 09:35 PM       View Profile for bklynboy   Email bklynboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bklynboy

needed to be brought back. Its too good not to be seen again
PassionandFun
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since 07-30-2003
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9 posted 01-28-2004 03:31 PM       View Profile for PassionandFun   Email PassionandFun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PassionandFun

oh so very romantic and with such underlying passion...

Very nice!
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 11-19-2002
Posts 7522
Ohio


10 posted 01-31-2004 07:47 AM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

thanks u 2
passing shadows
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displaced


11 posted 01-31-2004 01:34 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

*wondering how I missed this*

glad I went back here to run through my favorite poets
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 11-19-2002
Posts 7522
Ohio


12 posted 01-31-2004 09:56 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

thanks dixie doll
u are the queen of the bumps
 
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