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vandana
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0 posted 2003-12-28 04:22 PM



Iam missing you so much
As days and nights goes by
I think of you
Each time
Time runs slowly
And life is short
God knows
Life can be easy or hard
When you are alone
And need someone to hold you
S Iam missing you
I miss you
When I listen our song
on a radio
My tears were falling down
Because I look back
to the memories of love
you had given to me
I miss you so
Wish I could ask more for you
But I realize
you are not here
with me
I miss you so much
Some times
I wonder
how the days will run fast
without you
And I will able to hold you
again
When the time is so right
between you and me
One day
surely
we'll be together
but right now
Iam missing you so much



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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-12-28 04:49 PM


The missing is the hardest part!

Here's hoping it doesn't last too long~
vandana~  

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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right...there
2 posted 2003-12-28 04:59 PM


Sad and heartfelt write.  But there is always hope and faith to carry you to that day.

believe in what your heart feels...

Ravenwolfvoyager
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3 posted 2003-12-28 07:05 PM


It is a difficult thing and stretches the heart to envelope that which is lost. You write pure and from the heart. A beautiful write, thank you.
iliana
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4 posted 2003-12-28 07:24 PM


hope it isn't too long you'll be loney.....take care.......wishes for a good new year sent your way.
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2003-12-28 09:02 PM


VanDana~
Just lovely hon~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-12-28 09:10 PM


Sad yet wonderful write here vandana.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Nightshade
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just out of reach
7 posted 2003-12-28 09:34 PM


Enjoyed this very much. Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

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