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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Woodwind Like mauve you float your voice flickering a candle Have you danced this way before with bones curved and covered with gauze? Warm at the door I step out on the air hold still I’m dipped over backwards and filled |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Warm at the door I step out on the air hold still I’m dipped over backwards and filled ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Martie, your writing dances across the page, almost effortlessly, without ever missing a beat. Just lovely, you~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You are utterly astounding. I want to study the way of your pictures, how you create such a complete alternate scene with so few connections to the imagery you're using.... there it is in my head and I don't know where it came from! And the things you say in the spaces of the lace....yes, astounding. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely lovely dear Martie... This absolutely took my breath away. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Wonderful Martie, it is graceful as that of a Waltz, I loved it. Thank you. |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
As an ex-clarinet player, I love this. Brings back some lovely memories. Beautiful imagery. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What ARE you listening to? Whatever it is, send me the name, I would HAVE that music! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Mystical.....is just one way to describe your writing! This evoked quite an image. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
~Awesome~ "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - you do write with such magic - I was just taken away with this wonderful poem - Paul |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
The words dance and flicker like a candle flame. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ I can only *smile* at the beauty of you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Martie Trying to think of a descriptive word that fits what I think of this poem.....Amazing comes to mind, but that is not strong enough...Anyway, thank you for the dance ______ice ><> |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The winds that bend the woods of night, and bring to us a poetess supreme. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yup, I agree with Ratleader here... you're astounding indeed beautiful lady  Maree. "I can't believe |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I think I agree with Ed here MLP. Yes, you are.  K |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Have you danced this way before" ...oh so many times... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
ohhhh, yeaaaah, Martie, you lil devil. That dipping can get to guy! Nicely written, I add. |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
very kewl !  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, your wonderful writing has made me completely speechless.......again..... Just beautiful, the feeling your poetry brings. Hugs to you, sweet lady, Ethel |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
May I have this dance? You, dear lady, are sublime. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Martie, I love this, sweet friend, your poetry speaks and moves like mauve too, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
if I only had half of your mind... |
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