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Ashley79
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since 2003-12-28
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0 posted 2003-12-28 12:49 PM


The world we know is a myth.
A story
A Dream
A made-up world
And the writer created us all.
He can make our lives perfect in an instant.
But nobody wants to read about that.
So he creates twists in life, and therefore
We experience it.
And so thats how the world came to be.

Not from the big bang
Not from some perfect god
But from a writer, perhaps a brilliant one.
It all depends on how you look at it.

We're a myth
We're a story
A dream
A book
We're whats on the bestsellers shelf,
In the writers world.

It is the world we know as a myth
And we are its characters.

'you want to waltz and i want to tango but the thing is, we both want to dance' --  'we're still on the dance floor.  You waltz at times, and i try to

© Copyright 2003 Ashley Rae - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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1 posted 2003-12-28 12:52 PM


Ashley,

First, welcome to Passions! I hope you
like it here, this is an amazing place...

Secondly, you have a wonderful first
post here, I loved the twist and spin
you put on life...very interesting!

Again welcome and take care.
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-12-28 12:59 PM


Ashley, welcome to Passions! I think you will like it here. This is a very interesting first post. Just join right in and read and reply to the other poets, and I think you will fit right in. Most of all, have fun!

Please check your e-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at PIP.
Hugs,
Ethel/garysgirl
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wintertao
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3 posted 2003-12-28 01:01 PM


Welcome! a most creative pen, look forward to reading more !
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
4 posted 2003-12-28 07:04 PM


welcome to the passion
iliana
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5 posted 2003-12-28 07:21 PM


Welome to the forum!  Looking forward to reading more of your work.  
Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-12-29 09:29 AM


Welcome to Passions!  We hope you enjoy your new poet's home!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

bslicker
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7 posted 2003-12-29 09:34 AM


Welcome
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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Gaia
8 posted 2003-12-29 10:54 AM


WELCOME! and I enjoyed this writer's write very much. Hope the new year shines brightly for you, and your story unfolds as you wish.
Suetang
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9 posted 2003-12-29 02:52 PM


Hi Ashley

Thanks for sharing your talent with us, I hope you enjoy it here at PIP.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Enchantress
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10 posted 2003-12-29 03:10 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very much enjoyed your first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

passing shadows
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11 posted 2003-12-30 02:26 AM


nice write

Welcome to Passions!

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