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Open Poetry #30

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kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2003-12-28 01:03 AM

those seconds pass by like slow-no
after i get stumped by your question--

i read it slooooowly yet again,
press but-i-know-my-sums-are-right! figures into my calculator,
twirl with my pencil,
steal a peek at the clock and groan an agonised darn! she has removed it already, when will you learn?!,
radiate you deep, thoughtful vibes while on the verge of panicking

then Eureka!, God willing
I solve your problem with suavity,
avoid your somewhat-bewildered gaze and
register haste-relief at how i wasn't going to lose face

since your next question jerks me back to square one

[This message has been edited by kaile (12-28-2003 01:05 AM).]

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2003-12-28 01:10 AM

Kaile -- I liked! There's a real energy to your writing. And, I loved the punch line!

ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

2 posted 2003-12-29 06:50 PM

Kaile,

I liked this poem very much.

Take Care and have a good new year!

~Laura~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-12-29 07:08 PM

LOL, square one just might come around more again, so be prepeared.
Enjoyed the part about the face. LOL.

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