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Jes
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0 posted 2003-12-27 09:12 PM


How do i find my hidden angel ....

I look arround deep in my soul....
Wondering thoughts of missing her near.
I look arround in the world of us to be....
Huhhhhh i miss her is she here.

I look arround and feel the touch of her soul....
Deep inside she is near, but i miss her though.
We are trapped in a life were we should be free....
I know she is not home but i hoped, and my smile would just glow.

I look arround, and feel her comming closer to my soul....
I smile and count the days.
If i could do magic, anyone this would see....
I want to meet her soon again, hope she feels the hearted strays.

I look arround and i just cant find my soul....
She know why cause its with her to keep her heart so warm.
I hope the story will end with her and me....
I cant wait to feel her charm.

Siiiiiiiiiiigh

Smile

Jes


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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-12-27 10:01 PM


Jes, this is a sweet poem. I hope you
do find your angel soon.
Hugs  
Ethel

Jes
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2 posted 2003-12-28 06:36 AM


Thanks Ethel hugs back smile.

And i know were she is so, i just hope will meet her soon again.

Smile

Jes


Margherita
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3 posted 2003-12-28 07:24 AM


The lovely song of longing will surely be answered.
Nice write!
Love, Margherita

harash
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4 posted 2003-12-28 07:30 AM


A beautiful write jess.

always Harash

Jes
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5 posted 2003-12-28 11:51 AM


Smile yeah i liked your words lovely song of longing smile, though its abit precare situation, but im sure my thoughts will be heard tahnks Margherita

Thanks Harash she is beautifull smile, glad ya enjoyed.

Smile

Jes


iliana
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6 posted 2003-12-28 08:20 PM


JES -- hope you find here in 2004 (hope it is a happy year)!  
Jes
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7 posted 2003-12-29 02:20 AM


Smile thanks Iliana, i hope it will be too.

Best wishes for a happy new year.

Smile

Jes


ParisGrl
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8 posted 2003-12-29 06:47 PM


Jes,

Great Poem!  I hope your angel comes back to you soon.  Have a great new year.

:-)  ~Laura~

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-12-29 06:50 PM


Nice...James
Jes
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10 posted 2003-12-29 07:03 PM


Thanks - ParisGrl

She will smile and happy new year to you too.

Glad ya enjoyed - JamesMichael

Happy new year to you too.

Smile

Jes


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