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Open Poetry #30

Gestures Of The Lake

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-12-27 06:45 PM

~*~
Where water lends the space between the air and earth
Co-mingling shores in vertical horizon
Upon a horizontal plane, shimmering quick silver
We beseech two worlds, two destinies
The ballet of awe and adoration
Arching backs, entwined in fantasy…
My being ebbs beneath the weight
In stirred and breath warmed want
And in the blindness,
I hear the lapping lullaby
You rock, I ripple

Copyright Kkh 12/27/03

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-12-27 06:48 PM

Catching my breath!
Wonderful write.
Love, Margherita

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2003-12-27 06:53 PM

Very nice

regards

Dave

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-12-27 08:08 PM

Kathleen~

'I hear the lapping lullaby
You rock, I ripple'

If I read nothing more this day ...
this thought says all I need it to say~

You are magnificent !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-12-27 08:39 PM

You rock...I ripple...

An interesting concept...love the power of
this.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2003-12-27 10:51 PM

OOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Wow!

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

6 posted 2003-12-27 11:59 PM

Breathtaking!!!! A wonderment of gentleness and sernity, your gift is unyielding.

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