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Michelle_loves_Mike
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0 posted 2003-12-27 02:13 PM



a friendship dies a sad way,,,,
a lie told, believed too fast.
so much forgotten,
good thrown aside,,,
was it worth it?
trials conquered,,
happiness shared,,,
all tossed to the wolves,,,
no more to there,,
no secrets to share....
no pain to comfort..
no laughs to enjoy,,,
no wasting time till the dawn,,,
the hurt you've dealt,,
is too much to bear,,,
my heart is torn..
no healing to be given,,,
im sorry the pain you've dealt,,,
will never be forgiven

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

© Copyright 2003 Michelle Albright - All Rights Reserved
Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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1 posted 2003-12-27 02:40 PM


powerful poem with a real edge to it - well written and well said - Paul
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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2 posted 2003-12-28 03:44 PM


True........you pretty much said it all, and well.  take care, lol
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