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Ravenwolfvoyager
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0 posted 2003-12-27 12:29 PM


A crying plea from tears on a string
A passing of keys solo in harmony
An interplay of one thought and one journey
Different levels of tribulation within one heart

Different ventures undertaking one destiny

Sing to me thy vacant voice
Give me thy wonderment to fulfill
My struggles are tied with yours

My harp messengers my unyielding breath
The peace of the air is born into life
Thy wonderment forever will live
Thy voice take me to death.


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-12-27 12:45 PM


we are all bonded in one way or another

music and poetry can always bring us together

I love this write, though I do not listen to Mozart or play the piano anymore

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2003-12-27 12:59 PM


RWV:
You seem to play my thoughts...
A Maestro in his own write ,
relationships are like this...
From subtle chords of one harmony, to multiple creshendo lifting the hearing soul to ecstacy.

I am enjoying your poetry very much.
TD

wordwizard
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3 posted 2003-12-27 01:30 PM


yes there are those invisible bonds, good write ...and season's greeting


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4 posted 2003-12-27 01:32 PM


enjoyed the song
now I'm humming again

Michelle_loves_Mike
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5 posted 2003-12-27 02:17 PM


well orchestrated,,,,,flows well from ear to heart
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 2003-12-27 07:56 PM


Mozart is one of my favorite composers of classical music and his songs do reflect love...passionate love ...every time I listen I am inspired to write romantic love poetry.

My favorite Mozart sonata?

My favorite Beethoven is "Fur Elise"....

You pluck the stings of my heart with words of poetry that sing to me like a song of love...

How did You know That I sing?

~ARH


Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (12-27-2003 07:57 PM).]

iliana
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7 posted 2003-12-28 01:18 AM


Really beautiful poetry!  Happy New Year!
SharaRose
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8 posted 2003-12-28 01:55 AM


My fave that brings tears to my eyes everytime I would hear my cousin play was "Swan Lake" Music that would heal a soul. A song that brings us both back to summers together as kids, too.

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (12-28-2003 01:57 AM).]

mytuesdaywishes
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9 posted 2003-12-28 02:30 AM


what an inspiring interpretation of mozart, music becomes our own when we give it words

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

Suetang
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10 posted 2003-12-28 03:59 PM


Hello Ravenwolf

It is so easy to see how much music inspires your life and your writing.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2003-12-29 06:16 PM


Enjoyed...James
jaicie114
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12 posted 2003-12-29 07:02 PM


Very nice, RWV...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Martie
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13 posted 2003-12-29 07:12 PM


Music is a universal language...and touches many.  Loved the meaning in this lovely poem!
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14 posted 2003-12-30 02:00 AM


And Pat was oh so right about you! I'm glad you're here, mon.

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15 posted 2003-12-31 12:01 PM


I sincerely hope you make a home here. You're worthy already and will be among this group's best.



~~J

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16 posted 2003-12-31 12:16 PM


Classical

Played often

The gentle weaving of the trees
The sound of the huntsmen
The toll of the bells

Music

Dave


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17 posted 2004-01-21 12:37 PM


Hey Jeff, here's one I missed back here on the back.
Have I told you lately that I love your writing?

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18 posted 2004-01-21 03:09 AM


Lovely.
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19 posted 2004-01-21 11:26 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I find Mozart to be a genius of a composer and I believe his music brings life to every orchestration, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Gentle Spirit
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20 posted 2004-01-22 02:39 PM


Your words are like a symphony to the ears...
lovely.  Mozart is not one of my favorites, I lean more towards Yanni...but Mozart is timeless, as are your words.  HUGS

Kethry
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21 posted 2004-01-22 03:45 PM


I see you have a following, that does not surprise me...what does surprise me is that you continue to write masterpieces that flow effortlessly.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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22 posted 2004-01-22 06:26 PM


These words produce music in the hearts of a reader... beautiful work!
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