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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-12-27 07:11 AM


To ascertain

I turn the treadmill of a style
To ascertain a frown or smile
To look into the peak of hew
The color that is true of you

You are my mystery in the mist
Locked within my mind or cist
Ever present yet unreal
Held within my vex and feel

You are the base of dreams I know
You are the emblem of the glow
The presence of a spirits place
That haunts me in my mental space

The rabbit of the greyhounds chase
A rabbit of forever’s grace
A rabbit that will not slow down
Hence the furrows of the frown

But I will run eternity
For just the thought of ecstasy



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-12-27 08:18 AM



Smiling at you...
Especially since my dreams
vexed and hexed
my slumber.

Good morning, Sy!

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-12-27 08:31 AM


But I will run eternity
For just the thought of ecstasy


Yep, Seymour.....
Goodmorning Sy-guy  
I hope that you had a wonderful Christmas...
we did.  
Hugs to you,  
Ethel


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3 posted 2003-12-27 08:58 AM


"But I will run eternity
For just the thought of ecstasy"

Morning Sy!
Someone hexed my slumber last night...
Need extra hot tea to wake me up this morn.
~Smiles, Hugs & tea, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

scorpio
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4 posted 2003-12-27 09:00 AM


I would join you in the pursuit of ecstacy.  Well done Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

Midnitesun
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5 posted 2003-12-27 09:38 AM


In hot pursuit, heh? Seems the dreams are escaping this morning.

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2003-12-27 11:10 AM


Oh but I know that YOU know...
dragons are faster than rabbits.

(for Randy)
(for Sybabes)


Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-12-27 04:41 PM


Sunshine
Thank you sweet. Hugs

Ethel
I did and thank you.

Nancy,
Hugs back love.

scorpio
You are welcome. Hugs

Midnitesun
Yes they are, Hugs


JM,
you're so smart. WWRS

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-12-27 05:04 PM


okay....I got my Seymour fix...now I can go to work
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-12-27 06:04 PM


passing,
Thank you sweet.



Margherita
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Eternity
10 posted 2003-12-27 06:42 PM


hmmm ... dear Seymour, the thought of ecstasy will carry you powerfully ahead on the path of eternity.

Love and hugs. Margherita

vandana
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11 posted 2003-12-27 06:43 PM


enjoyed
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2003-12-27 09:02 PM


Margherita
I hope so,

vandana
Thank you dear.

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