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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-12-27 01:30 AM



ain't no room to grow no mo
sometimes solace silence be
ain't no room to grow no mo
sometimes boxes let ya be
flippin channels
fit the slit
drifting curling rhapsody
backwash ringing bell complete
feeling tingled back of hand--
curling silks of want to be
twined between the finger'd play--
say,
until the rafters bray
open
till
the finger died
pointing at accused

she said

and held it
just another lie
waiting to come home
she tried
watching gathering of fry
tossing truthful bone...

let me slice a lover's cross.

Let me suckle suck the grave.

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wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08
Posts 483
on the way to next world
1 posted 2003-12-27 01:36 AM


Sounds like a vacuum strikes the hearth after all the gifts are opened...best of holidays to you and the best for the New Year

ecrivan



[This message has been edited by wordwizard (12-27-2003 01:37 AM).]

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2003-12-27 01:56 AM


(you really left me...)

smile? ecrivan? that was the first line of part two.

stay tuned for more (or less) real serenity...

happy happy, e.

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (12-27-2003 02:39 AM).]

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows
3 posted 2003-12-27 02:10 AM


Now who is who my dark witch friend?


serenity blaze
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4 posted 2003-12-27 02:57 AM


smile.

I believe that might be,

"now who is whom?"

and the dark witch stuff?

most certainly subjective.



You are my buddy.

C?
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 190

5 posted 2003-12-28 12:13 PM


me likey you poem
very nice indeed.
you write good.
me have good english skill
me likey indeed

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

6 posted 2003-12-28 03:02 AM


ain't no room to grow no mo
sometimes solace silence be
ain't no room to grow no mo
sometimes boxes let ya be


I may not be thinking what you're thinking here hon, but it sure suits me tonight.

luv ya Luscious

"I can't believe
I've lost the very best of me"

Natalie Merchant


Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2003-12-28 09:09 AM



I'll take the real,
please.


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