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Open Poetry #30

No Substitute For You

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-12-26 10:36 PM

No Substitute For You

This holiday season
I was looking for
chocolate covered cherries,
and for you.
I didn't find
either one,
so without,
I'll have to do.
That doesn't mean
I don't yearn
for that chocolate,
or for you.
I can always find
a substitute
for the chocolate,
but there's no
substituting you.

JamesLee
December26
2003
Jean-Paul Sartre said,
"If you're lonely
while you're alone,
you're in bad company."

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

1 posted 2003-12-26 11:17 PM

Awww, James...

This one is soooo sweet! Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-12-27 12:19 PM

sniff, sniff...this is a tear-jerker for sure. Wow...don't do that. Don't make me cry.
:'( So sad.
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

WannabePoet
Member

since 2003-12-10

Posts 62
New York USA

3 posted 2003-12-27 01:12 AM

Very nicely penned. I crave chocolate too :P
May the passion ever flow through your pen.
Tobi

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2003-12-27 03:20 AM

Just like sugar and sweet-n-low....the real thing is best! I agree!

No substitute when it comes to love...love has to be real....

hmmm....I just purchased a box of chocolate covered cherries.....and I can't eat the whole box...

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (12-27-2003 03:22 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2003-12-27 07:28 PM

So lovely, James.

There are many ways to taste sweetness, but where the heart is involved, there is less choice ... there is the One.

Love, Margherita

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