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Open Poetry #30

an undeveloped spectrum

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2003-12-26 09:43 PM

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

1 posted 2003-12-26 09:47 PM

WoWsA, this is very cool...
I've read alot of great poetry by you but this is def in the top shelf.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-12-27 04:28 AM

so beautiful

you are so good at these

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-12-28 01:07 AM

Snow, this is beautiful...the poem
and the presentation, too.
Thanks for sharing it. I sending it back for another round.

Hugs

Ethel

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2003-12-28 01:15 AM

Amazing.......as always! Happy New Year!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2003-12-28 01:24 AM

you are beautiful.....

and this?

AMAZING

This morning there’s a calm I can’t explain
By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone,
I will bend light pretending it lingers on

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

6 posted 2003-12-30 03:43 PM

thank you all very much for your
kind thoughts, each comment is
very much appreciated.

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

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