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jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-12-26 08:03 PM



Losing myself in your smile,
I find myself falling…
To a place of bliss,
A realm filled with joyous
Anticipation of the touch
I crave from your fingertips --
Of slaking my thirst in the glory of you,
Dancing with the Divine,
And speaking with the Infinite.

I lose myself in your smile
And find myself in your arms,
Hearts racing in time with eternity…
And bodies dedicated
To the sensual desire of creation.
Minds attuned to the whispers
Of myriad universes --
All that came before and will continue
Long after our union.

I find myself in your smile
And surrender my soul to us…
To the Oneness,
To the joy and tranquility
Of our timelessness.
To the knowledge that we have
Passed this way before and will so again --
Completing the cycle as it
Was meant to be.

I surrender myself to your smile
And gain all the glory that is you…
The light that emanates from your center
Bathes me in the light of love
And caresses my soul
With the passion of the ages –
This is life,
This is Truth…

This simply is.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

© Copyright 2003 Jaicie - All Rights Reserved
Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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Denmark
1 posted 2003-12-26 08:20 PM


Smile

WOW taht smile turned your world arround, and blessed you with the touch of love.

Smile

Jes


jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever
2 posted 2003-12-26 11:06 PM


Why, yes it did, Jess...

LOL...thanks for the reply!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-12-27 04:31 AM


simply maybe, but so beautifully too
jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
4 posted 2003-12-27 10:47 AM


Awww, thanks, Dixie!!!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Michelle_loves_Mike
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since 2003-12-20
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5 posted 2003-12-27 02:34 PM


so simple is the feeling of how your love makes you feel,,,,very well, you have found a wonderful way to put them
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
6 posted 2003-12-27 07:09 PM


Dear jaicie, there is no doubt that you are lost in that smile ....it unfolds Universe for you and there you dance on the highways of forever.
And you dance beautifully ....
Love, Margherita

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
7 posted 2003-12-27 10:02 PM


I'm envious of this write, because
it is simply quite beautiful!

Take care,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
8 posted 2003-12-27 10:21 PM


Michelle and Margherita...thank you so much for your replies. It thrills me so when people like my work.

Amy...oh, please don't be envious! It's yours, too!  I am dedicated to the belief of One mind, One consciousness...so, I'm completely sure that you had something to do with this since you like it so much!!! Thank you for your sweet comment.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2003-12-30 11:34 PM


Nice...James
jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
10 posted 2003-12-31 11:49 AM


Thanks, James!  

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
11 posted 2004-01-02 12:08 PM


Love the romance and sweet surrender JC.
Sounds like a nice place to get lost in
  

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
12 posted 2004-01-02 12:24 PM


Hi, Blues...

Yes, it's a very nice place in which to lose yourself!  Thank you for your reply.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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