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Midnight Sonata
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Midnight Sonata |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
The leaves lay brittled and scriptured Upon a moonlit paradise they befall; A midnight sonata in which they gleefully sway Before the viewing of a moonlight shimmering cascade; Under the weathered willows in which they pray To the majestic stars from whence they came. [This message has been edited by Ravenwolfvoyager (12-26-2003 02:17 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful scene weathered willows...nice touch |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ok RWV... I am inspired now... The moonlight here just blew a kiss to velvet night. Nice. Where have you been hiding this art? TD |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh...First line... Sciptured... I think the "r" succumbed to the beauty. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very lovely. Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Indeed beautiful! Lauren~ This morning there’s a calm I can’t explain-By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone bending light pretending it lingers on |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
RWV... Whew...nice! Thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Willows...dancing in moonlights sway...underneath the stars... words that I could paint paintings of... thanks for allowing me to dance with the willows.... ~ARH  Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
A very moonlit trip. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 I am really enjoying the imagery in this write, and the music. Welcome to Passions! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Another poem, poetically turned. One of my favorite sonatas... you have captured its delicate sound very well. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely stunning.......what more can I say? Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Upon a moonlit paradise where all dreams rest their want swaying to the movements of the willow's branches beneath a shimmering sky... music indeed. Lady Ollyne |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
a lovely night indeed. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is awesome! Eric |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Simply beautiful, it took my breath away... ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Well, a new poet with depth-- I like the way you think and I like your voice. Good stuff here. |
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