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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-12-25 01:39 PM




Sweet little sparrow
on stark black branches
for whom do u wait?

the trees have siphoned
the dark right from the sky,

wrapping their branches
in the womb of the noctural,

the rain is teeming
the stars dispersing
between the carved out trees,

their longing hearts
cradled by deep slumber,
dipping freely
into the well of nighttime,

conjuring up dreams
to spark the rebirth
of the moon colored flowers


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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2003-12-25 01:42 PM


What vivid images seen through your most beautiful eyes.
Merry Christmas Inked One...
TD

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-12-25 01:43 PM


same to you, always the best
shine on, you crazy diamond..........

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-12-25 04:49 PM


InkyOne~
Such a nice read on this Christmas afternooning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2003-12-25 05:19 PM


the trees have siphoned
the dark right from the sky,

wrapping their branches
in the womb of the noctural,

~*~

A lovely write! Merry Christmas, Michelle!

Margherita
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5 posted 2003-12-25 06:19 PM


Your eyes behold beauty and your pen records masterfully.
Love, Margherita

vandana
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6 posted 2003-12-25 07:48 PM


enjoyed merry christmas to you
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-12-26 04:24 AM


damn

you are getting so deep

I'm enjoying the style

ambrish
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8 posted 2003-12-26 06:17 AM


very beautiful.
Kahlil
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9 posted 2003-12-26 11:11 AM


"the trees have siphoned
the dark right from the sky"
This is one of my favorite views.  The imagery in your writing really has a way of taking us there.  ~K~

inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2003-12-26 05:39 PM


thanks and the best to all of you
bklynboy
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11 posted 2003-12-28 03:09 PM


Moon colored flowers...how creative. Nice read...keep em coming!
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