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Under the Tree
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Under the Tree |
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the ant Junior Member
since 2003-11-30
Posts 18ca, usa |
smell of fresh crisp and clean under that tree presents he will bring can't sleep warm and cozy under those sheets awaiting the next morning cold outside wide and awake it is the next run to that tree, jumping Joy we see under that tree Our mom and dad take pictures, smiling |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
An essential picture, nicely penned. Merry Christmas. Love, Margherita |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a wonderful scene that will be playing out in so many homes as I type this morning. Thanks for the visual. Welcome to Passions, and Merry Christmas to you!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
if only this scene could continue throughout the yesr..nicely written ecrivan |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a well written scene of joy, excitement, and love. Happy New Year... ~K~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i liked your minimalistic, essentialist style here...vivid images you penned |
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