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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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On Stage Standing on a rostrums whim I primed my thoughts to proper trim Spoke a rhyme of starter prime And bought an edge of moments time. I heaved an echo of a sigh Gave a chuckle and a cry Friends I said, I bid you well We enter now a phantoms cell Think of this a spirits sail Upon a sea to catch a whale The harpoon is a pointy why Heave ho my lads let it fly Into the borrow of its core We’ll sink the shaft of evermore And fly in wakes eternity Until we reach fraternity The rune is one of egos bail To set a harpoon in a whale |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This is deep, Sy, just like you. Your metaphor was really good. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy...on a snowy Christmas Eve. Wonderful morning write as usual. May you and yours have a very happy holiday season.  ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LngJhnAg Well when you're out at sea the water is deep. LOL Happy holiday my friend. Nancy, You make the tea, I'll bring the spirits.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mornin', T-Man! All the world's a stage And we the players on it, But you're the shining star Who can write the perfect sonnet! Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel   |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Trim your sails and hoist your rig tomorrow I want a Christmas jig! Make it of fairies and sugarplums, and weave it just right that we all share in some. Merry Christmas, Sy! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, my friend I have really enjoyed all your precious rhyme I look forward to many more for the rest of all time Every morning I look for your smiling face here Sometimes you bring smiles and sometimes a tear But I know I will enjoy whatever you may say Whether if you are serious or you want to play May you and yours have a Happy Holiday season And may we all remember the true Reason Hugs to you, sweet Seymour  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Merry Christmas Sunshine. Ethel, You are a sweetie pie, Have a happy holiday. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...Merry Christamas and thank you for the words your write.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Merry Christmas Martie, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda gloomy |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You made me feel the whale's song in the breast ... Spirits dancing across your lines. Love and light. Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Not really, Margherita Enjoyed your reply. |
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