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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-12-23 07:13 PM


Love  (Share It Together)

Love doesn't always
keep two together.
Some fall apart, unable
to endure stormy weather.
True love will stand
the test of bad weather.
Love gathers strength (power)
when two share it together.

JamesLee
December23
2003

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-12-23 07:26 PM


Wonderful write James...
Have a very Merry Christmas.


Steve Motuel
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2 posted 2003-12-23 07:29 PM


Too True!

Steve

Jes
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3 posted 2003-12-23 07:32 PM


Smile

I enjoyed James, though Love can be so strong that it tares apart, cause we do fear to hurt. And that is sometimes necessary to get going.

Smile

Jes


jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
4 posted 2003-12-23 09:25 PM


Let's hear it for love!  Great write, James...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Michelle_loves_Mike
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5 posted 2003-12-24 12:17 PM


"true love will stand,,the test of bad weather"..so true,,,,goes beyond the ols adage of a "fair weather friend",,,true love will make it,,,even if the storm washes all else away,,,,,,,very good read, i enjoyed it greatly
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

iliana
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6 posted 2003-12-24 12:26 PM


JM--true.  I liked the rhythm of this one.  Hope you're well.  I'd like to see another stanza on this one -- ??
Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2003-12-24 01:09 PM


The true nature of LOVE is known to you.
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-12-24 06:43 PM


Thank you Enchantress, Steve, Jes, jaicie, Michelle, iliana and Marherita...
Yes iliana...me too...James

Martie
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9 posted 2003-12-24 09:49 PM


James

This is so true.  Happy Holidays to you!

Kit McCallum
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10 posted 2003-12-25 07:35 AM


Very true indeed, James. Wishing you and yours a wonderful day, this Christmas morn.

Best wishes,
/Kit

passing shadows
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11 posted 2003-12-25 12:52 PM


very true

beautiful write

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