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thinktwice
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0 posted 12-23-2003 12:52 PM       View Profile for thinktwice   Email thinktwice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for thinktwice

you're gone
did all i could
you've gone
i don't understand

i've always been there for you
waiting up long nights
listened to every word you said
i never thought you might...

...eventually leave
coming of age in independance freed
i've come to grips
with what i should have done
i'll always love you
you are my son...

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1 posted 12-23-2003 02:57 PM       View Profile for C_ROK06   Email C_ROK06   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit C_ROK06's Home Page   View IP for C_ROK06

that's sad.. at first i thought it'd be about a boyfriend or sumthin... but this is definetly... (spose to be a sad face... usually doesnt show up like it tho...) i love it. thanx for sharin...

"So let us then try to climb the mountain,not by stepping on what is below us,but to pull us up at what is above us,for my part at the stars"-MCE

[This message has been edited by C_ROK06 (12-23-2003 02:58 PM).]

Ericc
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2 posted 12-23-2003 03:10 PM       View Profile for Ericc   Email Ericc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ericc

Very poignant.

Eric
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3 posted 12-24-2003 06:49 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice writing...not gone, just asserting his independence...James
thinktwice
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4 posted 02-05-2004 11:48 AM       View Profile for thinktwice   Email thinktwice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thinktwice

yeah...independence is what is being asserted. i am the son. i wrote from my mother's perspective.
 
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