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You're Gone
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You're Gone |
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thinktwice Member
since 2003-12-23
Posts 125United States |
you're gone did all i could you've gone i don't understand i've always been there for you waiting up long nights listened to every word you said i never thought you might... ...eventually leave coming of age in independance freed i've come to grips with what i should have done i'll always love you you are my son... |
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C_ROK06 Junior Member
since 2003-10-23
Posts 49 |
that's sad.. at first i thought it'd be about a boyfriend or sumthin... but this is definetly...  (spose to be a sad face... usually doesnt show up like it tho...) i love it. thanx for sharin..."So let us then try to climb the mountain,not by stepping on what is below us,but to pull us up at what is above us,for my part at the stars"-MCE [This message has been edited by C_ROK06 (12-23-2003 02:58 PM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very poignant. Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...not gone, just asserting his independence...James |
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thinktwice Member
since 2003-12-23
Posts 125United States |
yeah...independence is what is being asserted. i am the son. i wrote from my mother's perspective. |
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