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Jes
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0 posted 2003-12-23 12:02 PM


Go back to your memories of youth....
Were you played the songs of childish freedom.
Find your thoughts of you in the world....
Playing the piano, and feeling only you arround.

Play it for ya mom, and maybe just for you....
But play it with freedom and soul like you always do.
Sometime when you start again you will face,  your soul....
And maybe just maybe that will make you whole.

Go back to your memories of youth....
Were you played the songs of childish freedom.
Find your thoughts of you in the world....
Playing the piano, and feeling only you arround.

Your mom your mom she was so proud....
She wanted you to let it out.
Not just that time when you was a child....
But also know when growing pretty and wild.

Go back to your memories of youth....
Were you played the songs of childish freedom.
Find your thoughts of you in the world....
Playing the piano, and feeling only you arround.

She wants you to know the love arround....
Plays the piano that you have found.
So play for all of us, and play it with your soul....
That is what makes the world and you whole.

My best thoughts on Passing Shadows note on another poem.

Smile

Jes

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-12-23 12:32 PM


Oh my goodness, Jes. This is beautiful.

I am really speechless. I am really touched by this poem you have written here.

My heart is warm and alive now after reading this. And my fingers are wanting to play those keys again, yes.

Jes, dear friend, I love you for this poem, and what a beautiful poem it is for me.

I am keeping this in my library here, and I am printing it out to frame it and put it on my wall.

This is so sweet of you, just in time for Christmas...what a Christmas present you ahve given me.

I could never really show you, just in words here, how deeply this touched me, how much I love this, and you.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-12-23 12:33 PM


Jes,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-12-23 12:34 PM


you have made me very happy
Jes
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Denmark
4 posted 2003-12-23 03:12 PM


Smile back at you passing sometimes our soul just leave a note, to write a story on hmmm i maybe know this is abit of your soul so go with it and play. One day i want to hear that sound comming from that piano.

Smile and happy holidays

Jes


Jes
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5 posted 2003-12-23 03:13 PM


Thanks Seymour

Smiles are sendet, with happy hollidays.

Jes


C?
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 190

6 posted 2003-12-23 03:44 PM


smile
or laugh for a little while.
bile
not from the liver file
but from taking lessons
on how to smile
and laugh for even just a little while.

excellent poem, I'll ahve to look for more

smile
C?

Jes
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7 posted 2003-12-23 03:50 PM


Hehhehehehehh thanks C? couldnt resist to grin a litle here.

Good to see all those smiles.

Smile

Jes


Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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8 posted 2003-12-23 04:15 PM


Such a wonderful and uplifting poem... smiling at you

"I can't believe
I've lost the very best of me"

Natalie Merchant


Jes
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Denmark
9 posted 2003-12-23 04:19 PM


Smiles back

And thank Dark Angel, glad ya enjoyed.

Smile and happy holiday

Jes


Aimster
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10 posted 2003-12-23 04:49 PM


Jes,

this is so very very beautiful, and a
wonderful gift to share with PS...you
have a wonderful heart!

Happy Holidays,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Jes
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Denmark
11 posted 2003-12-23 04:58 PM


Smile

Thanks Aimster, glad ya enjoyed.

Smile and happy holidays for you too.

Jes


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
12 posted 2003-12-23 05:11 PM


Beautiful...simply beautiful.
Have a wonderful holiday!

~Let peace begin with me...    

Jes
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Denmark
13 posted 2003-12-23 05:20 PM


Smile thanks and glad ya enjoyed Enchantres

Smile

Jes


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