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thinktwice
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0 posted 2003-12-23 10:24 AM


Attention in complete divergence
From realities simply giving
All only for nothing
Inconsistent in all their apathy

Softly singing of paralyzing remorse
A state birthing the feelings lost
Tragic addiction to painful course
Love for self breeds ultimate cost

A filling void serves contradiction
Without shadow it conveys
Consequence in all its irony
And brevity without generosity

Live unto sorrow’s adhesion
The simplicity in all its glory
Destiny and irreversible complication
Endless rivers of ill-fated technicality


© Copyright 2003 Adam Wolf - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-12-23 10:35 AM


Welcome to Passions:  Adam, we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

This is an intriguing first post, I will look forward to more

please check your email for a special greeting


Kindly~

Greeneyes~

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Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-12-23 11:26 AM



Adam, I, for one, will look forward to reading more of your poetry.  I've already stumbled across a little something that tells me about your attitude, and you're going to fit right in to our Family of Friends!

Welcome to Passions!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

thinktwice
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3 posted 2003-12-23 11:32 AM


thank you both for your warm welcome. i look forward to spending more time in these forums and getting to know you all thru your writing.


Adam


"beauty is in the eye of the beholder"
   -Finger Eleven

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4 posted 2003-12-23 12:52 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
I very much enjoyed your entrance post!
I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Let peace begin with me...    

Aimster
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5 posted 2003-12-23 03:06 PM


Adam:

Welcome to Passions! wonderful first
post, I'll be looking for more.
Happy Holidays,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

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