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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2003-12-23 09:35 AM




There are many patches
that make up my life,
a patch for a mother
a piece for a wife.


There is a strip of color
for eyes of emerald green,
threads of golden hair
stitched into every seam.

Little strips of lace
for the soft side within,
tiny remnants of leather
for the daring woman of sin.

Ruffles make up borders
for my delicate side,
a quilt layering for things
that I'd much rather hide.

A collection of patches
putting my life on display,
all having been sewn together
to make me what I am today.

Knots tied securely
to show I am strong,
some stitches placed lightly
to correct when I'm wrong.

A combination of patches
just little pieces of ME,
all woven into the cloth
of my life's tapestry.



It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (12-23-2003 09:35 AM).]

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Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2003-12-23 09:37 AM


i remember this! this is so very very
beautiful and written, might I say even
elegantly...

Happy Holidays,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-12-23 09:40 AM


Beautiful write Donna...
Have a wonderful Birthday
and Happy Holidays as well.
Love ya lady~

~Let peace begin with me...    

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