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Sven
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0 posted 2003-12-22 10:18 PM


December sky
and
December ground

seem to have
much in
common

but, one is
white of glad
where the other is
white of mourning

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I am tired . . .

© Copyright 2003 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Sadelite
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1 posted 2003-12-22 11:03 PM


I liked this.   I had to stop and think about what you were saying...
                     Sadelite

wintertao
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2 posted 2003-12-22 11:10 PM


very creative!
Kahlil
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3 posted 2003-12-22 11:44 PM


You are so right, Sven, I've never thought of it that way....  great write!  ~K~
passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-12-23 02:54 AM


very true...very true
Aimster
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5 posted 2003-12-23 09:08 AM


not only does your intelligence shine
through in this one, but so does your
talent...Happy Holidays John

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

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6 posted 2003-12-23 09:18 AM


Very thought provoking write m'friend.
So good to read you here.
A very happy holiday to you and yours.

~Let peace begin with me...    

vandana
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7 posted 2003-12-23 06:46 PM


enjoyed
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8 posted 2003-12-23 06:50 PM


Sven
Good one.

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9 posted 2004-01-07 05:41 PM


I missed your Christmas work because I was absent...and because I have been an idiot.

Love these words...and love being back here.

Me

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


vandana
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10 posted 2004-01-07 06:16 PM


nice
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