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Hockeychick19
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0 posted 2003-12-22 09:54 PM


Will I ever get to see you,
Will I ever get to touch you,
Maybe someday,
But for now only in my dreams.

How do your kisses taste,
How will your skin feel against mine,
I want you to make me feel wonderful,
Make me shine,
You can’t right now,
Only in my dreams.

My heart is wide open,
Without hesitation,
Ready to receive your love,
For real,
And in my dreams.

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

© Copyright 2003 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
wintertao
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1 posted 2003-12-22 11:02 PM


sweet! very nice
Sadelite
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2 posted 2003-12-22 11:05 PM


I liked the title of this and the way you carried it through... Enjoyed.
                        Sadelite

Hockeychick19
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3 posted 2003-12-22 11:30 PM


Wintertao - I'm glad you like it.

Sadelite - I'm glad you enjoyed it... I write from my heart, I believe it's the best way.

Thanks for replying
~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Aimster
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4 posted 2003-12-23 09:10 AM


beautiful write...very soft, and your
heart shows wonderfully! I hope all your
dreams come true.

Happy Holidays,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Hockeychick19
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5 posted 2003-12-23 12:43 PM


Amy,

I'm glad you liked it. I also hope everything works out in my favor.   Thanks for stopping by.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Ericc
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6 posted 2003-12-23 03:18 PM


First we dream...and then we know.

It's a magic and magical formula.

Beautiful words and dream.

Eric

Jes
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7 posted 2003-12-23 03:46 PM


When hearts do trust....

The dreams come through.

So there ya go.

Smiles

Jes


Hockeychick19
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8 posted 2003-12-23 04:22 PM


Eric - I hope that the formula works to make it really happen somday. Thanks for replying.

Jes - You are so very right... I just hope my dreams come true sooner rather than later. Thanks for stoppin by.

Hugs,
~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

vandana
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9 posted 2003-12-23 06:41 PM


enjoyed
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2003-12-23 07:08 PM


I have lots of dreams like this...reminds me of the song "In Dreams"...by Roy Orbison...James
Hockeychick19
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11 posted 2003-12-23 08:16 PM


Vandana - I'm glad you liked it... Thanks for replying.

James - I don't think I've heard that song, probably because I'm too young. (I'm only 20). Thanks for stopping by.

Hugs,
~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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