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Open Poetry #30

Before I Burn In Hell

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2003-12-22 07:11 PM

Before I burn I'd like you to know,
All my hardships made me grow.
Before I burn I'd like you to see,
That you are everything to me.
Before I go and burn,
I'd like to thank you for giving me a turn.
Before I burn I hope you will realize,
You're more to me than some possession or prize.
And before I burn and become mangled,
I'd like to say I believe towards you I was angled.
Before I burn in Hell's fire,
I want to say to you...you're my one desire.

RE-FUSE-TO COMPLY WE'RE TRYIN TO DO THIS OUR OWN WAY and now I'm watchin the fallen stars surroundin me 15 minutes of fame -SKINLAB-

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-12-22 08:05 PM

I'd like to thank you for giving me a turn.

I'd like to say I believe towards you I was angled.

Loved those couple lines, most of all!
Sadly beautiful, and lots to be said for this!!

Enjoyed your poem very much, Snowflake!

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2003-12-22 10:53 PM

your words do burn deep, and true,,,
i feel your pain,,and hope in each line...
sweet words man,,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2003-12-22 11:31 PM

Before I burn I'd like you to know,
All my hardships made me grow.
Before I burn I'd like you to see,
That you are everything to me.

Sadelite

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