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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-12-22 05:34 PM


How Shall I Say

Hello, my beautiful June.
So nice to look at
by the light of
the silvery moon.
Where will you go.
What will you do.
If only my life
could be full of you.
How shall I say
the way I feel.
My hearts overjoyed.
My life a thrill.
Goodbye, my beautiful June.
Hope to see you
again real soon.
Alright, tomorrow night,
beneath the silvery moon.

JamesLee
December22
2003

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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
1 posted 2003-12-22 07:19 PM


nice write

RE-FUSE-TO COMPLY WE'RE TRYIN TO DO THIS OUR OWN WAY and now I'm watchin the fallen stars surroundin me 15 minutes of fame -SKINLAB-

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2003-12-22 08:37 PM


Beautifully written, James.  

"When your life is tossed and turning
And you are on the raging sea I'll come and pull you from the water Then you will know that you are free" - MWS

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-12-23 03:39 AM


You have said it~

Hello~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2003-12-23 04:40 AM


Dear James, this is so lovely, so full of effervescence!
Love, Margherita

Hockeychick19
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since 2002-10-29
Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA
5 posted 2003-12-23 12:47 PM


James,

This is soooo sweet. I love it.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
6 posted 2003-12-23 03:23 PM


Go for it !

Smile

Jes


Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2003-12-23 03:27 PM


James,
Enjoyed the read.

vandana
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8 posted 2003-12-23 06:40 PM


nice read
jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
9 posted 2003-12-23 09:33 PM


James...

You know just how to pluck those heartstrings, don't you?  Love it!  Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
10 posted 2003-12-23 10:29 PM


Loved this my man...so true, so fitting "June's" I, too, have known....


Great piece!

jwesley

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