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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917


0 posted 2003-12-22 02:59 PM


On a pure crystal
You weave
Magic woven desire
Winging to failure
Desiring domination of those you desire
Freezing comfort
Beneath hell bent ire
Drying spiraling wings
Swooping to
Dream
Desire
Control
Magic
Heating words
To dissolve love to feeling
Songs no love heard
Heat melting every seam
Heart bursting every dream
Melting stars to die
Flooding rivers to desire
Your dream of failure
Rocks calm your flight to fire
Torrents race to your ire
Frenzied peace
Warms your heart
Cold love your birth to start

When all else is lost
A stone, a wall and hopefully
Poetry will be written

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-12-22 03:02 PM


Interesting poem but I like it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

wintertao
Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL
2 posted 2003-12-22 11:17 PM


kewl!
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