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jwesley
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0 posted 2003-12-22 10:17 AM



This Christmas Day

On this tree
whose leaves fall like rain,
whispers of sound
on presents unclaimed,
ribbons have come unfurled,
lights have dimmed – burned out,
and Christmas balls leave shattered remains
on carpeted floor –
the phone never rings,
bright green tree turned blue,
despairingly shades to black –
the loss of you,
this Christmas Day.

w.james beard, jr.
(c) december 2003

. . . in memory of the four-hundred plus recently fallen who need a Wall of their own.

© Copyright 2003 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-12-22 10:19 AM



Thank you, James.

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2003-12-22 05:57 PM


Amen!
Bless you,  James Wesley!

vandana
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3 posted 2003-12-22 06:08 PM


thhank you for sharing this with us
Nightshade
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4 posted 2003-12-22 08:25 PM


Indeed. God Bless. Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2003-12-22 08:28 PM


Well said, James.

"When your life is tossed and turning
And you are on the raging sea I'll come and pull you from the water Then you will know that you are free" - MWS

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-12-24 06:55 PM


Words from a soft and understanding heart...James
Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2003-12-25 08:16 AM


A poignant reminder on this Christmas morning James. You've captured this well. Thinking of you, and the families who have lost their loved ones today.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-12-25 08:23 AM


jwesley
Well done sir, Merry Christmas.

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-12-25 12:17 PM


sadly beautiful, very touching
Margherita
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10 posted 2003-12-25 06:46 PM


Thank you for this very sensitive, yet powerful poem.
Many tears are shed and the light remains hidden for many mourning hearts.
Love, Margherita

vandana
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11 posted 2003-12-25 07:51 PM


thank you!!!!!!!
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12 posted 2003-12-25 08:51 PM


JWesley~
Your thoughts touch me like no other~
Thank you, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

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13 posted 2003-12-25 09:12 PM


your soul is shining, again
nakdthoughts
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14 posted 2003-12-25 09:34 PM


yes...though sad to say. History does  repeat itself.


& A Merry Christmas
to you.

M

jaicie114
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15 posted 2003-12-26 07:09 PM


jwesley...

Thank you for this sensitive and caring verse.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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