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last minute huddle |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Partings are not always sweet. Sometimes sorrow celebrates-- advice to those on winning streak-- take no pause, don't hesitate. Should the miracle bestow smiling shy upon blush face-- winking giggle glee on those who never knew the warmth of grace, take no pause, don't hesitate-- thinking just may mean demise strike the iron, meld the plates and let the present call past lie... Sparks will fly from tempering but swords unpolished dull in light a compromise of strength within concealed within the throes of fight fractures in the metal show revealed within the fire's trial strike the iron as she glows flaws as such can reconcile by the pounding of the test. Take no pause, don't hesitate. let the fickled fingered fate be the one from midst of hand and by rebuke you may command-- every second screams ye choose... The clock ticks slow in mockery. tick tock win or tick tock lose? I choose to die upon my feet-- with choice my honored epaulet buried by more cautious fools. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (12-21-2003 05:32 PM).] |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Yanno sis, if ever the chance comes to speak at a graduation ceremony, use this one. Seriously. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen, great write...love the cadence of this. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity...I admire your strength and character and your poetic expression. Hugs to you, lady! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! You have this way...of leaving me speechless! Love ya lady! Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
WOW !! ~~~  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
serenity, And so we doth do battle to vanquish our foes, be they without, or within. You have style and grace, formidable weapons, both. May the holidays for you and yours be a time of joy and contentment, and the years to follow exciting and prosperous. Doc |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Courage in the face of time, with your head inside its jaws. Bravo! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Keep those candles lit Serene one, and I will light one too  Lub ya! Happy Holidays |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Hey Blaze, do you remember me? (Bath Away the Day, I Say.) You poems have a beautiful flow, but are kind of like a chess game to me. Every time I think I understand what you mean, I become unsure. You are such a deep, reflective thinker! I would hate to play a game of chess with you! You are already three moves ahead of me! Just wanted to stop in and wish you happy holidays. Merry Christmas. Sadie |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Woo-hoo! One of your best! I am going to pack this one away in ye olde library for a bit. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
every second screams ye choose... The clock ticks slow in mockery. tick tock win or tick tock lose? I choose to die upon my feet-- Just make sure that doesn't happen soon, ya hear? *S* This is absolutely excellent... well written!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
stand and fight. . .yes, it is the only choice. . . excellent my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- I am tired . . . |
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