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Michelle_loves_Mike
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0 posted 2003-12-21 05:05 PM



We've all had them..
can't find a shoe,
boss flips a lid,
car keys run away,,
we've all had these days,
winning a bet,
finding a forgotten love note,
fitting into that shirt again,
we've all been there,
one day into another,
good and bad,
sometimes we have to stop,

and think

there are those out there,
that would find our worst day,
a day in paradise,
see each day for what it is,,,
treasure the good and bad,
at least you are there to have,
one of those days

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

© Copyright 2003 Michelle Albright - All Rights Reserved
Kazeru
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1 posted 2003-12-21 05:23 PM


It so true that we should treasure any day good or bad, because don't your worst days make your best days just not that greater?
Beautiful poem, I loved it!
Hope to see more of your work

->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<-

Margherita
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2 posted 2003-12-21 06:17 PM


Yes, in all the things we experience there is always a hidden treasure, even if sometimes in the moment we can't recognize it.

Very beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Ringo
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3 posted 2003-12-21 11:55 PM


You know, Gorgeous... when you told me you could write, I didn't think it was THIS good....
I'm glad you decided to join us.

Does anyone really know what time it is?
Does anyone really care?

HopeS
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4 posted 2003-12-22 02:25 AM


yes I agree , treasure each moment , for its often the simple things in life that can bring so much joy !!!
Hope

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5 posted 2003-12-22 05:05 AM


very nice... I needed this
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