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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917


0 posted 2003-12-21 03:32 PM


Boy Soldier

The drums were beating hard that day
Barefoot I marched along
Lost in the magic
Dreaming to the song
Never known a good day
Nor meal or rags to fit
Barefoot over cobbles
Marching time with my stick

Winter blowing
Softly hard
Feeling
O so grand
Patrolling through the yard
Guarding my grand stand

A few more years
I join
Wear a decent coat
Fill up my belly
Until it stops at my throat

Smartly marching in the rain
Rifle by my side
Clean uniform for life
To be so satisfied

Cheers echoing softly
Kisses flustering by
Boys follow as we march
The ladies
By and bye

We board the boat
Flags are still
In the empty chill
My warm coat
Seems to bring naught but ill

My face is in the earth
My feet are digging too
The sky is flashing light
My stomach flashes too

No one else is left
I hid within my tomb
Digging all I could
To see my mother’s womb

No one came back
But I hear marching feet
I look at the steel at night
Can someone beat retreat

I wait for that death
Dishonourable I know
It doesn't matter how you die
It just matters how you go

I have no qualms for my coward's life
I've lived it all I could
I started at the bottom
With the heroes right on top

When the killing came
They all felt they should stop
So they sent us out poor souls
To make it to the top

With all their fancy words
Our senses bemused
Told us we were heroes
We would get what we deserved

Now we are all dead
But they still breed anew
They raise their glasses up to us
And bloody heroes too.


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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2003-12-21 03:59 PM


Hello Dave

This was so well written and your words chilled me to the bone.  I could see a vivid picture unfold right before my eyes.

Welcome to Passions!

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2003-12-21 04:59 PM


Impressive write.
Welcome to Passions.
Love and Light. Margherita

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
3 posted 2003-12-22 03:37 PM


I think this one deserves more replies.

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
4 posted 2003-12-22 03:40 PM


Awesome write. Welcome to Passions!!!!!!

Cold hands means a warm heart

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