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borgeN
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 9
Norway

0 posted 2003-12-21 12:26 PM


a woman
is made of
flesh and blood

hopefully

like you and me

you may,

touch her
feel her
taste her

but,
a woman

this strange creature

who dares comprehend her capricious brain?
who dares comrehend her inscrutable heart?

such action
my friend,

equals to suicide


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Michelle_loves_Mike
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since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2003-12-21 07:58 PM


pretty deep,,,,,but,,,can be true in some cases,,,,,,

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Kazeru
Junior Member
since 2003-12-16
Posts 31

2 posted 2003-12-21 10:40 PM


Indeed it is true that trying to understand some women can be suicide, but is not the same true for men?
When you find that special person, there will be no problem understanding each other!
I really loved this poem!
Greetz
Kazeru

->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<-

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519

3 posted 2003-12-21 11:08 PM


borgeN,
   pretty deep thinking... Your poem sent me into thought.  I think your message applies to anyone you care about, whether it be a friend, a child, or a love.   Continue to think, my friend, and take care of yourself.  
                      Sadelite  

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (12-21-2003 11:09 PM).]

serenities_blood
Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56
New Zealand
4 posted 2003-12-22 12:09 PM


i agree with the rest of them so far.
Deep not in the content of the words, but in the context of them.
I can see what you mean behind what you write.
Very true as well!

xoxLORxox

borgeN
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 9
Norway
5 posted 2003-12-22 05:41 PM


thank you all

it was not my intend to be deep

this is just a fact for most men :-)

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