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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-12-21 07:58 AM


Loves Embrace

I wrapped myself in loves embrace
A shawl of lace, the rose your face
Climbed a stairway to the moon
All in a summers afternoon

Wondered in a field of green
Knelt to you within the scene
Whispered notes of tenderness
Flowers of your loveliness

Covered you with faille of trace
Fitted them with gales of grace
Offered you my heart in store
Dipped in lover’s magic awe.

Drew you near with phantoms tale
Where ecstasy composed the trail
Lit a lamp of never die
To light each step upon its lie

An Islands archipelago
Sixty some odd years ago


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Michelle_loves_Mike
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1 posted 2003-12-21 08:01 AM


so touching,,,,,you can feel the scene,,,very awsum

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

1slick_lady
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2 posted 2003-12-21 08:37 AM


sigh....h
scorpio
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3 posted 2003-12-21 09:06 AM


So romantic a write.  Beautifully crafted.  Sy, your words evoked memories of a wonderful afternoon spent last summer.  Thank you.

believe in what your heart feels...

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4 posted 2003-12-21 09:20 AM



You're such a sweetheart...
no wonder Isabelle won't let go!

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2003-12-21 09:21 AM


Awwww...
What sweet sentiment, the gentle grow and share of time.
Loved this Sy...
Merry Christmas.
TD

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6 posted 2003-12-21 09:35 AM


To have a love such as you and yours share is incredibly rare Sy.
Over sixty years....oh wow!
Wonderful morning write.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Let peace begin with me...    

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7 posted 2003-12-21 10:03 AM


Seymour, you know that being the hopeless
romantic that I am, I loved this beautiful
love poem this morning. Thank you for sharing
your love with us.
Hugs to you and yours,  

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-12-21 10:08 AM


Michelle,
Thank you so much.

1slick_lady
Thank you dear.

scorpio,
To evoke is good.

Sunshine,
And you are a love.

Nancy,
Be right over for tea.

ThisDiamond,
Thank you sweet.

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-12-21 10:20 AM


garysgirl
Thank you love.

ecrivan
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10 posted 2003-12-21 10:20 AM


A pleasant read this holiday season..best of seasons to you and yours Sy


Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-12-21 10:24 AM


ecrivan
I thank you my friend and the same to you.

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2003-12-21 10:31 AM


Good morning, T-Man!

Thank you for Sy Guy sigh! ~ lovely, warm memories... The kind that when revisited, are as fresh and as vivid as when they were being made.

Lovely poem from a lovely man,

Warm holiday huggums & blessings,
EA

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2003-12-21 10:33 AM


Earth Angel,
Love the huggums,

EvocativeVerse2
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14 posted 2003-12-21 11:12 AM


Well done Seymour. Love it! But then you knew I would.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2003-12-21 11:21 AM


EvocativeVerse2
Thank you sweet.

Martie
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16 posted 2003-12-21 12:31 PM


Sy...You are such a lovely man!  
Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2003-12-21 01:29 PM


Martie
And you are such a lovely girl.

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18 posted 2003-12-21 04:41 PM


Such are our memories,  of times that never
die within us...  Thanx for the pleasure of
sharing this with us...

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19 posted 2003-12-21 04:44 PM


Seymour dear, these memories are so beautiful and you express them in such a masterful way,  you share the emotions so intensely that they seem born in the NOW.
Your heart knows.
Love and light. Margherita

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20 posted 2003-12-21 05:32 PM


Lovely imagery, Sey.


Core

Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2003-12-21 07:29 PM


Magnus
Thank you Barry

Margherita
A lovely comment, thank you dear.

Core,
Thank you sweet.

A Romantic Heart
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22 posted 2003-12-22 05:30 AM


Well this has to be the favorite one for me!

enjoyed sharing your memories!

~ARH


Seymour Tabin
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23 posted 2003-12-22 07:18 AM


Romantic Heart
Thank you for the read and bump.

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24 posted 2003-12-22 01:16 PM


How beautiful are both your words and your loving heart. *S*
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25 posted 2003-12-22 02:49 PM


sy,

beautiful write! as always you amaze...

happy holidays!
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Seymour Tabin
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26 posted 2003-12-22 02:53 PM


Amy,
You are a sweetheart. squeeze:

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