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Master
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0 posted 2003-12-21 04:32 AM


The forecast said the storm was only starting.
There was snow without an end in sight,
As if, in the middle of a slumber party,
All the angels gathered for a pillow fight...



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zenny
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since 2002-11-24
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1 posted 2003-12-21 05:30 AM


Wow!
Your words just hit me, really well written.

Hugs, kelly


Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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2 posted 2003-12-21 06:21 AM


Well put words, were you can see the angels make that pillow fight.

Smile

Jes


borgeN
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since 2003-12-21
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Norway
3 posted 2003-12-21 07:46 AM


very nice

last sentence is very good, i think

liked it

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA
4 posted 2003-12-21 09:31 AM


Nice images here.
Very expressive in a compact little purse of gold.
Happy Holidays, with all the trimmings.
TD

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Member Rara Avis
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5 posted 2003-12-21 09:31 AM


All the angels gathered for a pillow fight...'''

I love this, and that last line, what an image...perfect!
Lauren~

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6 posted 2003-12-21 10:07 AM


I loved the picture this
brought to my mind.
Hugs,

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