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Open Poetry #30

My Best Friend (Revised)

Denea Furr
Junior Member

since 2002-11-03

Posts 31
Indiana

0 posted 2003-12-21 03:52 AM

You are the wind sweetly blowing on my face
Your little arms held the best embrace

You are the sun shining warm in the cold
Yours was the love that I will always hold

You were the best friend I ever had
Yours was the voice that was never sad

You had more love than God could allow
That is why you are with him now

The presence of you is still so very strong
Though the time you had here wasn't long

The voice that was yours still lingers around
Though when I try to listen there isn't a sound

The way you would run when I walked in the door
It's hard to believe your not there anymore

"Silent White Light Filled the World. And the Righteous and Unrighteous Alike were Consumed in that Holy Fire. --Stephen King

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

1 posted 2003-12-21 06:36 AM

This is so sad let my tears fall to send some prayers and hopes.

This one fell right into my heart, and there it will stay.

Tears falling

Jes

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-12-24 01:43 PM

This is heartwrenching, beautifully told.
Love and hugs. Margherita

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

3 posted 2003-12-24 05:40 PM

wow thats very touching...I think its awesome. I think the poem could "look" better with a dif format but thats a very minor issue. The poem is very strong and stands on the strength of its message just fine thank you.

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