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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence 
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normal fall is smileless. the fall although slight is vertical to the mind. perpendicular line haunting perfect horizon. climb climb down to a new bribing color. the lighter shade of white is numb. |
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Denea Furr Junior Member
since 2002-11-03
Posts 31Indiana |
I like your poem. I'm not too good at judgeing poetry but is it about a sunrise or sunset?.. the meaning wasn't too clear.. but the choice of words was good. "Silent White Light Filled the World. And the Righteous and Unrighteous Alike were Consumed in that Holy Fire. --Stephen King |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
thx. this is not my meaning but it is yours to have any way you like it  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have been painted with that lighter shade of white |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
or maybe I was injected with it |
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chrissydome Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73germany |
i love your style so much! |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
some things just cant be numbed. voices voices all around no need to chase them all too familiar down. this poem is ok, tho not convincing tho im sure u know it |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
One simple comment... I wish I had written this. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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