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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio

0 posted 2003-12-20 08:05 PM



In endless circles,
rain chases itself
into portraits
of indecision,

the deluge pours
by the window, as
eyes distort in
the maze of trees,
warping as they sway
on the rainsoaked sky,

there are no clear
exits tonight,
only the waivering
between self
preservation
and the freedom of
madness


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skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2003-12-20 08:15 PM


I've wavered there before too....nice work.

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-12-21 12:36 PM


Very good poem, Michele.
Hugs,
Ethel

bklynboy
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3 posted 2003-12-22 06:49 AM


Love the rain...and this too!
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2003-12-22 05:36 PM


Love this downpour that runs so close to home.

Excellent poem Michele~  
Make it Merry girlie!!!

Many hugs for all you do!  

Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2003-12-22 08:42 PM


Nice work.  

"When your life is tossed and turning
And you are on the raging sea I'll come and pull you from the water Then you will know that you are free" - MWS

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