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Michelle_loves_Mike
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0 posted 2003-12-20 07:15 PM



When you find it,,,,,
you won't be searching....
Trial and error,
will have made you give in....
when you give up....
turned every stone,
searched every face,,,
it will find you,
a touch,,a whisper,,,
not a flashy gala...
it will be right, lasting and true...
when you don't see it there,
when the silence feels deep,
thats the real one,,,
and you'll know it,,,
when you find it

© Copyright 2003 Michelle Albright - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2003-12-20 07:16 PM


Welcome, Michelle, and happy holidays!  Beautiful post, and I agree.
Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes
2 posted 2003-12-20 07:30 PM


Michelle- If I had known you wre this talented, I would hav forced you to join much, much sooner.
Look in your mailbox for a special treat.

Does anyone really know what time it is?
Does anyone really care?

Greeneyes
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3 posted 2003-12-20 07:35 PM


Hi, and Welcome to Passions.  We are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

please check your email for a special greeting


Kindly

Greeneyes~    


~~**~~**~~**~~**~~
May the miracle of
Christmas touch your
life with special blessing

H A P P Y  H O L I D A Y S


[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (12-21-2003 09:19 AM).]

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2003-12-20 07:35 PM


Welcome to Passions.
A wonderful first post.
ThisDiamond

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5 posted 2003-12-21 06:50 PM










(sigh) Silence is not a pretty thing to experience, now serenity is that which is like velvet, this is a most poignant and thought-provoking debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Michelle, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michelle, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

cinnamongirl
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6 posted 2003-12-21 06:53 PM


It seems to know you first... and it waits patiently, until you decide
to turn with the world
and to truly open your eyes...
to the love and beauty
that awaits inside.

Love,
Moca

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7 posted 2003-12-21 06:54 PM


Oh, sorry... your writing inspired my last response!  Forgot to say that yours was an inspiring thought... but I guess that that is obvious now!  

Moca

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8 posted 2003-12-21 06:57 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very very nicely done first post.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Let peace begin with me...    

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