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Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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Denmark

0 posted 2003-12-20 05:18 PM


Sometimes people walk apart in anger and hate...
But with my wife and me thats not on debate.
We still love eachother but have lived apart...
We need in ourselves to restart.

We know the kids will be left for a few days...
With thoughts in many ways.
But we have chosen our way in hearts to tell...
We still love eachother but well.

We have made up to live close...
For our kids and friends of those.
We want to show...
That apart, life still can go.

The kids they dont know yet...
Before Christmass they shall not the story get.
We even made out till the house is sold...
We could never in our hearts be so cold.

We go apart of course with tears...
But our heart still hears.
We still have kept our smile...
Life is not over yet, we simply have chosen another mile.

So we go apart not in anger or hate...
That would never be up to debate.
We go apart in love...
That is more than ever can come from above.

Smile, this is my life right now, i saw a few of ya comments on one of mine, i just had to tell we are all ok, and still smiling.

Smile and a merry everything.

Jes


[This message has been edited by Jes (12-20-2003 06:52 PM).]

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2003-12-20 05:21 PM


Parting is never easy or happy...but I applaud your love and light together.
Hugs, and happy holidays.
TD

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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2 posted 2003-12-20 05:27 PM


Smile thanks TD, Merry holidays to you to.

Smile

Jes


Aimster
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3 posted 2003-12-20 06:30 PM


Jes,

beautiful sincere write...this was so
honest and true. I pray everything works
out for you and your family.

Happy Holidays,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
4 posted 2003-12-20 06:34 PM


Smile thanks Aimster, im sure it will. We both do evrything we can to make it the best it can get.

And happe hollidays back.

Smile

Jes


iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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5 posted 2003-12-20 08:16 PM


Jes -- heartfelt hopes your life gets smoother -- what a difficult situation.  Thanks for sharing.
ParisGrl
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6 posted 2003-12-20 09:23 PM


Jes,

I hope everything works out for you and your family.....have a good holiday.

Laura

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7 posted 2003-12-20 09:30 PM


Jes~
Nicely shared~

Merriest of Holidays to you and yours~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

SharaRose
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8 posted 2003-12-21 01:51 AM


Cool!!! Good resolve for everyone!!! I really admired the comfort for the childrens sake!!!! Nice to read. Merry Christmas.     
Terri~   


Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (12-21-2003 01:54 AM).]

ecrivan
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9 posted 2003-12-21 01:55 AM


appreciate you're being positive about working things out..happy holidays Jes


Kahlil
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10 posted 2003-12-21 02:02 AM


Jes:  I'm in a similar situation, so I do know many of the feelings you are experiencing, but we don't have children at home to consider. I admire your respect and caring for one another and for doing what you both see best for your children.  Blessings to you and your family. I'm saving this touching write.  ~K~
Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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11 posted 2003-12-21 03:50 AM


Iliana - Yes true its abit difficult, but it will be ok for us all.

ParisGrl - Smile somehow we will manage it all, thanks

Marge Tindal - Ya welcome, hugs sendet back with a smile and Merry holidays to you too.

SharaRose - The children, shouldnt ever be hurt by such, but when they do we can at least as loving parents, do what we can to help it so it goes so smooth as possible, and without anger.And Merry Christmas to you too.    

ecrivan - Happy holidays to you too, smile if i wasnt positive i couldnt live, and tell the kids taht there is something to live for.

Kahlil - Yes there are many thoughts to be thought and also many just running at the back of the eye lids. But with one step at a time we will get through, prays for you too, and hope that you will be ok as well.

Thanks all for ya comments and thoughts happy holidays to all.

And a smile.

Jes


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