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Aimster
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0 posted 2003-12-20 08:54 AM


Discovery

Shadows seem to be lingering more these days
As I try to discover the woman I'm meant to be
My life is full of so many ups and downs
Sometimes, it's even a mystery to me

I keep walking the path of my heart
As I let Him lead the way
Knowing when I reach the end of my journey
A rainbow will await me on the last day

There are moments I hang my head and cry
Times when my laughter feels the air
As I reach beyond just what is easy
Searching for the answers that remain "out there"

I'm always guided a certain way
Even though sometimes the path is unclear
Seconds, minutes, hours, days pass one into another
I close my eyes, to chase away the fear

I feel angels watching me everywhere I go
My eyes scan the deep blue way up high
Though I don't see the path I'm suppose to take
I feel it inside my heart, no longer questioning why

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

© Copyright 2003 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-12-20 09:43 AM


quote:
There are moments I hang my head and cry
Times when my laughter feels the air
As I reach beyond just what is easy
Searching for the answers that remain "out there"



You've written a fine definition here for the word HUMAN.

Aimster
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2 posted 2003-12-20 10:44 AM


thank you midnite
happy holidays,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-12-20 10:53 AM


I loved this...great write!

Eric

Antonio_L
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4 posted 2003-12-20 03:35 PM


There are always some answers they seem to lay just ourside of our reach Amy. But keep reaching, just like you are.

It is a wonderful piece, so sweetly written.

Tony.  

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5 posted 2003-12-20 04:43 PM








(smiles) Yay, and always follow your heart and keep that key in your back pocket as you open new doors, for sometimes it is best to go back to the room in back of you to make it feel like home, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-12-20 04:47 PM


Aimster
An up poem and I enjoyed it.

iliana
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7 posted 2003-12-20 05:04 PM


Amy, love stretches us and stretches us.  And, it always hurts (in one way or another) to be stretched.  When there is love, I too, believe the angels are watching.  Lovely sharing here.  BEEEEEEwell.
Aimster
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8 posted 2003-12-20 05:25 PM


thank you all for your wonderful
replies...you've made me smile.

happy holidays,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

vandana
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9 posted 2003-12-20 05:27 PM


nice
ParisGrl
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10 posted 2003-12-20 07:09 PM


Amy,

Great Write! I'm glad you finally found your way.

Happy Holidays,
Laura

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