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Hockeychick19
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0 posted 2003-12-20 02:55 AM


Is there ever a day when you don’t talk about you,
Maybe you’d like to ask me what’s new,
But whenever I talk it seems like you don’t care about what I have to say,
You ignore me,
Even though you say you adore me.

Love is supposed to be fun,
But it seems like you always want the front,
It makes me feel so alone,
I feel like I’m nothing to you.

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

© Copyright 2003 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-12-20 02:59 AM


you are not alone...I feel like that sometimes too
Hockeychick19
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2 posted 2003-12-20 03:12 AM


Dixie,

Thank you for replying. I realize I'm not alone in feeling this way, but all too often I feel like all he wants to talk about is himself. When I start talking I feel like I'm talking to air and that he's not there, that really gets to me. But anywho thanks for the kind words.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

iliana
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3 posted 2003-12-20 04:03 AM


HC19 --- seems like there is no lonier feeling than being with someone who doesn't provide room for your self-expression -- obviously, you are a communicator. It's as loney as being alone altogether if not lonier.  Hope things improve.  
ice
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4 posted 2003-12-20 05:21 AM


H.C.
Sounds like you have met Narsisis, it is a foolish man that does not allow his partner to also gaze into the pool....How will he know your beauty unless he allows you to show it to him through your words?
Well penned thoughts....:-)
______ice
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Ericc
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5 posted 2003-12-20 10:57 AM


Powerful and expressive...your voice is heard.
And felt.

Eric

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6 posted 2003-12-20 11:00 AM


Goodness, I'm sorry that you're feeling this way.
That can be a horrible feeling. I was
treated like that by my deceased husband a lot.
Thanks for sharing your heart with us.
Hugs  
Ethel

Hockeychick19
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7 posted 2003-12-20 12:19 PM


Iliana - You're very right, I just hope it gets better from here and not worse... Thanks for replying.

Ice - You bring up a very good point. My hope is that he'll realize what he's doing and try hard to reverse it. Thanks for stopping by.

Eric - Thank you, I don't know what I'd do with myself if I didn't express my feelings in poetry and post it here... I'd probably go nuts! Thanks for replying.

Ethel - I'm sorry to hear about your husband and I'm sorry you had to go through that. I hope things are better for you now. Thanks for stopping by.

Thank you everyone for your kind words and support.
~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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